steve homework,My wonderful world

On your blog, make sure that your first piece of work is an introduction to the wonderful world of YOU (talk about your MA you want to do, why do you want to do it, your previous studies, your country, your family, your impressions of living in London etc. etc).

-Everyboy have a expection from themselves.Even a employee,sport man,teacher etc.
They have a differrent dream.Somone want to be a doctor and someone want to be a police.
I beleive that someday the dream will come true.
From my wonderful world,it've happen when i have a girlfriend.I mean she my first love.
It's seem like we're soulmate.We're do everything together such as watching film,shopping and enjoying.It's a perfect time that everything look great.If you fall in love someone.Finally we're broken but it's good enought to memory of good period.
However,my life still alive.I decided to study in MA(master of arts)because i think my life isnot a simple.I want to be a businese man.I have to study from this course for make a money and improve ability as well.I want to work on aboard and chatting with foreigner to sharing a idea.
Anyway,i graduated a communication arts (public relation).I worked for 1 year experience.It's just a short period time.In these day,i'm really enjoy in London.Because i live a weather in this place and i hope i'll meet a best person in here.

This weekend or next week, go to the library or a bookshop and find a book that is SPECIFICALLY connected to YOUR subject (make sure it's easy to read). Read a few chapters and write a one-paragraph summary of what you read and your opinion about what you read. Also include a list of new words and example sentences of how to use these words. Please don't include definitions of the word (hopefully the example sentence will remind you what the word means when you read it.)

-I pick the book from university library.Name of book "In the company of giants" chapter 4 Steve case american online (AOL)
Mr.steve case is one of giants youngest CEOs,he's strongly believed in an idea for a product,and persisted with his belief until the idea succeed.and he's created the idea was online interactive service.It's mean interactive service allow a user to tranmit and manipulate value information.For example,AOL customer can download book airline ticket or chat with other AOL customer.The service is interactive because the user request and manipulate specific data for
his or her own user.

Question 3-4

What is the introduction a chance for you to do?
-To make a impression and giving some general way.

Why do you think planning is important when you are writing an introduction?
_because i have to dicide about the story which one should come first and another.


Look at the example essay question: "Is the present level of immigration in the United Kingdom beneficial to the country?" Read the introduction (below the plan). You should be able to see that the introduction contains all the elements from your answer to question 1 in the Section A. Also, notice the use of verb tenses.
-Present simple.present perfect, future.


I would like you to rewrite this introduction (to the same question) using the language suggestions from the University of Manchester website and post it on your blog by the end of this class. If you do not have a blog, write it on a separate sheet of paper to give to me by the end of class.
-Recently, researchers have shown an increased interest in immigration at uk benefit the country,according to United kingdom government.The analysis presented to the House of Lord Economic Affairs Committee comes within days of Immigration Minister Liam Byrne announcing a points-based system for immigrants from India and other non-EU countries. .....

Question 2

Establishing the importance of the topic:
-It is a common disorder characterised by ......

Establishing the importance of the topic (time frame given):
-In recent years, there has been an increasing interest in ......

Highlighting a problem or controversy in the field of study:
-However, a major problem with this kind of application is ......

Highlighting a knowledge gap in the field of study:
-So far this method has only been applied to ......

Focus and aim:
-This paper will focus on/examine/give an account of ......

Jim homework.First question

-What should a good introduction contain?
Before i'm start to writing introduction.i have to thinking about the main idea come first.
Show a major of the topic first then ,give a second idea.and show some of contribute idea in a essay.Anyway the structure of introduction should be like a this
1. Preliminaries
2.main text
3.end matter
(all of this choice have to finish in 1 paragraph.)
The rule
-It should include a short review of the point and background.
-It should try explain what i writing to report.
-Telling a purpose.

Learn from seminar

Firstly,I though seminar really simple to me cause i graduated from public relation but i think it wrong.Today i learned a lot of thing to improve myself.I'm alway to miss a point and i quite a confuse sometime.Because someone talking unclear.Anyway i got many idea from them.but most of them is a same idea. e.g. people spent a 4-5 hour a day to watching a television.Another e.g. they think some reality was real and some reality was fake that depand on a producer (creative).
That was really amazing to share a idea with group.However, i have to study hard and try to understand a topic more than the pass.

example same idea in our group : Television image

There was many opinion related with a topic.All of them got the same idea as well.Such as

• Get more advertising to improve a good image.
• timetable for serving
• Brand royalty
• rate for child and adult.

-My strong points is listening and body language.

-My weak points is grammatical accuracy.

http://edition.cnn.com/2008/HEALTH/diet.fitness/07/18/weight.loss.sujit/index.html

On my opinion,i think Mr.Sujit Bhattacharya come to the right way.because he knew it by himself.If he donot change him today that he gonna a trouble on the future.

+++Right way+++
1.He research how to lose the weight on internet.
2.He avoid from a juncfood and high calorie food.
3.He tried to eat some more fruit and vegetable.
4.He tried to exercide everyday.

Finally,he loss a weight.and he has a good health again.